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Wow! I absolutely loved this poem! The story was great, well in a sad way of course. It was long, but kept my interest, so great work with that! The ...

Loved the poem! :) The story was great, and you had some really good imagery. It was easy to see what was happening. I liked the way you rhymned some ...

I loved this poem! It was well written and I liked how one line fell into the next. Everything was very connected. The idea/story of the poem was great as ...

Here is another poem that I wrote for my NaPo Challenge. I'm worried that the flow is off in some places, so your suggestions are greatly appreciated! I hope you ...

12: Hell of a School High school’s a place of laughter, A place we love to be, Ha, that’s the biggest joke, Here, I’ll let you see. If you aren’t ...

So, yesterday I tried out a limerick and today I'm trying a haiku. I know they are short so I took the pattern and doubled it. Hope that's okay :) ...

Hehehe thanks a lot! :)

Here is my attempt at a limerick. It's short and simple, but I'm pretty sure that's how they are supposed to be. Don't expect anything great. Ahahaa. 10. My Jeans ...

Thanks alot for the review! Okay, I'll let you know if I need any help. I can review your work as well if you'd like :)

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Thanks alot for the review! :)

This is a poem that I actually wrote for the NaPo Challenge, but I was hoping that I could get some suggestions on how to improve it. Thanks :) Her ...

Wow, this is amazing. There was so much honest emotion, that I thought I was going to cry. Of course, do not change a thing, it's perfect the way it ...

9. Her Eyes of Gray Her sparkling eyes of blue, Have dulled to a simple gray, The life that once filled them, Has now faded away. The dark, heavy rain, ...

First off, I love that song, which is why I read your poem. Ahahaha. Secondly, your poem is really good! I loved it. The flow and imagery were both great. ...