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Great poem! There are a lot of poems about love,but you still managed to make this one unique. I loved the concept of it and your word choice. I also ...

I really liked this poem, it was interesting. It almost reminded me of something that you could use for choral reading. I liked the ending how you said And all ...

This is very rough I know, and I plan on fixing it up. Actually, I will probably re-write the whole poem, but I just wanted to get down these words ...

I love this poem! It's adorable

This is in the spirit of Easter, and all of the delicious, yet totally awful food, that I ate. Oh, I swear I have an addiction to food

So, I could not write anything tonight. I tried, tried again, tried thinking of a new idea, another, and still I could not come up with anything decent. This was ...

Since today is earth day (I think?) I decided to write a haiku, since they are meant to be about nature. I combined three so that I could make it ...

Wow this is amazing! She looks gorgeous :) Her eyes and hair are my favourite. There's so much detail. Love it!

Loved the poem! The rhymnin and flow were both really good :) There weren't really any corrections or errors that I could find. I really like the story behind the ...

I can relate to this poem a lot, loved it :) I agree with a Amelia though, there wasn't a lot of emotion in the poem. Try adding more to ...

Hehe thanks a lot! :)

I really enjoyed this poem :) It had a fun and uplifting tone to it. I also liked the idea behind it. It's one of those poems that give you ...

The imagery and word diction you used were very powerful and unique. It really added to this poem. I couldn't find any apparent errors or corrections, so I'm not going ...

13. Trust Trust. Something that does not come easy, Something that is hard to maintain. It has a million clichés, All, very much the same. Why do people break it? ...

Thanks for taking the time to read and review :) I was actually talking about my school specifically, but it wasn't meant to be taken seriously. I was trying to ...