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Loved the poem! (: It has a great message. I also thought that the way you wrote it was very unique and creative. It's different than a lot of the ...

I thought that the story and idea behind the poem was really great and inspiring. I think by writing this peom, you are actually improving the world by motivating others ...

I love this poem! I think that a lot of people on here can relate to it. I thought that the flow and idea behind it were both really great. ...

Awe, thanks! (: Oh really, you should post it. I'd love to read it :D

Aahahah, thank you both! :)

Ahh its my last poem! Even though, I feel like I've been drained of all my poetic creativity.. I think I'm actually going to miss this! :( Maybe I will ...

Wow, I absolutely loved this poem! It has a dark feel to it that I like. The story was unique, and when I started reading I was so surprised. I ...

Yeah, I think it definetly is. It sucks.. :( I'm glad you liked the peom though, thanks alot! (:

Here is another one of my NaPo poems. I changed it a bit. All suggestions and comments are greatly appreciated! :D ~ Like a midnight breeze, She whispers in my ...

I love 19 and 20. They were so good! Ahahaha I got a laugh from 20 ;P

Thanks alot! (: I actually haven't been liking my recent ones... I think all my poetic creativity has been used up. Ahahaha. Oh well, later I can go back and ...

19. Blurring Reality My body becomes still, While the life around me, Rapidly carries on, Too quickly too see. Clean cut motions, Become a blurry mess, The words before me, ...

Wow! These are incredible. Gosh, I'm jealous. My favourite is definetly the first one. I love the way you painted the sky, the swirls and colours look great. I really ...

Blah, this one is not really great either. I guess this is more of a ramble of thoughts than an actual poem. I might write another tonight before I go ...

Great poem, creepy.. but still very good! The rhymning and story are both great (: Here are some suggestions/corrections: Stalker, stalker, following me, outside my house, and in my tree. ...