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I really liked this poem. There were some excellent images and a strong emotion through out the poem. There were some really vivid and creative lines. There was also a ...

This was a well written poem. It had a very nice flow and rhythm to it. I enjoyed the rhyming, and none of it seemed forced. I was just being ...

Hey (: I was wondering if you could review a poem for me when you get the chance. Thanks alot!

A blade of ice scrapes, the length of my back, radiating the cold throughout, my feeble limbs. Shackles sprout like roots, and grip, at the raw flesh, of my ankles. ...

I really liked this poem! There was a strong emotion throughout. I also liked the way that you placed the words on the page, it really gave an impact. I ...

I really liked this poem! It flowed really nicely, and the rhymning felt natural. The words you chose really gave it a dark and melodic mood. I was just being ...

An ashen haze, Blends the slopes of coal, With the velvet curtain, Hung overhead. Light is absent. Sound is muted. Left alone, With no one. Footprints carved, Into the ground, ...

Hey (: This was really interesting and entertaining! It had a weird, eerie, quirkiness to it and I think that's what I really liked about it. It was just so ...

I'm writing this for a school assignment, so any corrections and suggestions would be very helpful and appreciated. Thanks! (: Still half asleep, I could hear the soft thud of ...

I really like this poem! I thought that the imagery in this was really good, especially in this stanza: Glass pierces her skin, with cuts that run deep as the ...

This is a story that I wrote for my writer's craft class. It is a dark story that involves death.If you don't enjoy stories like that, then I don't suggest ...

Ouu I really liked this piece! I really liked the concept, it is not definitely not something you read on here everyday. It was different and refreshing. I also love ...

Wow...this was so good! I really think you should finish this, and if you do please let me know! I loved it. I'm usually not that big on romance because ...

Here's a piece I wrote for my writer's craft class at school. The assignment was to write a 500 word short story using show vs tell. It's around 570 words ...

I really loved the imagery in here! This was very descriptive and so full of emotion. It is hard not to get swept into the dark, intense mood of this. ...