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This is an interesting start... I'll give my overall opinion at the end. My thoughts as I went through: Some punctuation and spelling errors. Some of those lines in your ...

For a first draft, this really isn't bad. :) You have a good start, I think, and I'm interested in knowing more about these dreams of his, why he can ...

This isn't bad. ^^ I kind of like it, though there are a few areas that may need a little work... Nitpicks: "probably the worst thing to happen to one’s ...

Very nice. ^^ Amusing, with just a hint of dark seriosity (I'm writing the review, so I can make up words. ;)). "The patient shrugged, suddenly losing interest as he ...

This was amusing. XD Very entertaining. Just a few things I wasn't entirely pleased with... My notes as I went through: “All hinns arrn't tat hart,” my words were mumbled. ...

I like this. ^^ You did a good job adding at least a little seriousness into your rather random topic. XD Some specific things: "The way she twinkled her eyes, ...

'It's about a girl training to be a dragon gladiator, and its her first time in the arena.' Yes, this is just on YWS, but... May I suggest you let ...

"The thought had crossed her mind to simply deny that she was moving, and lock herself in her room. Refusing to leave. But then there was a certain romanticism about ...

"was an outcast, that no one cared about, or no one needed, or even both. They were jealous of me. Was it because I was different, because I had powers?" ...

Hmm.... Not bad. A few grammar/punctuation errors here and there. "The teeth were like upside down fangs, like dusty yellow daggers waiting for action" Second part of the sentance? Yay! ...

Not bad. ^^ My review: "There were no windows and it was made of black stone" This sentence and the one before it bothers me a little bit. Try and ...

I'm liking this. ^^ Reminds me of the books 'Graceling' and 'Fire' by Kristin Cashore... Have you read them? Not saying it's a BAD thing I'm reminded of them - ...

I really, really loved this. >.< Especially the characters... Mainly Mirzia. Actually, now that I think about it, I found Punzi a little annoying... A little whiny... On her own ...

I like this. :) My review as I went through: "The streaming sound as the speeding arrow head breaks the wind." ... The streaming sound what? This is what's known ...

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. STUPID COMPUTER. Uber-long review in progress. Computer made me back up to another page, and when I got back... Review went bye-bye. *facepalm.* SIGH. Okay. Let's try this again. ...