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Re: Hiding From Shadows
ehh...its just of shadows flickering from a candle or something ? sounds like a nice little place....for a bit.. i'd love to see this poems ideas and or images worked ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: Dispair
ehh i know despare.. depression and pain very.. well.. i suppose.. ehhhh -sratches head- why is that claw thing ripping your heart ? how it is affecting you ? or ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: that solitary good-bye
thanks AquaMarine27, FantasyWriter25 and springrain.. i don't know....what to really say... lol...sorry...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: that solitary good-bye
like if you saw this as conversation between 2 people.. like me saying all this to you...and then leaving when I'm done... this could sound better written in a different ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: that solitary good-bye
That solitary good-bye from those who we pre-mourn... Does but little to comfort the grieving soul. It is better to have them die..loving you ? That to let them live...hating ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: So i thank God...
it must be nice.. to have someone like that in your life .. no ? .. it'd be cool maybe if you expanded on why you loved them ?...not as ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: "Respect of being a female"
on behalf of the guys... sort of... the only ones that are really like that are the ones that are shallow and stupid...and insecure and what not.....and i know whats ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: my curse
the dots mean pauses...if i'm dying i'm going to be pausing...."before my death" a curse is a curse it doesn;t matter how it came about.. no ? the curse is ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: my curse
a...but the idea is that without hardship and pain...the guy kills himself because he doesn't know how to take it...because he never did.... and if it rhymes its by pure ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: my curse
i once cursed a man.. before my death. to live a life. without regret.. with out pain.. and strife.. of pure happiness. no hardships what so ever.. and then i ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: greetings all...i am silented1...
my music...punk and its branches... and the way i speak ? so long as i don;t have to drop my dots.. im good.. and the idk's, lol's and im's... are ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: greetings all...i am silented1...
Hello silent, and welcome to YWS! Well, it appears you prefer your own space. That's fine. In any case, I'm glad to meet you. It seems as though you've been ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: greetings all...i am silented1...
Hi. Welcome to YWS. I'm sure a greeter will come and flood this thread with information, but I'm just here to say hi. Lonely? PM me, I am too. Haha, ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: why a man died..
i once cursed a man.. before my death.. to live a life.. without regret.. with out pain.. and strife.. of pure happiness. no hardships what so ever.. and then i ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: greetings all...i am silented1...
my real name is eddie.. but call me silent... i like to write poetry.. i guess... i've been writing a little over a year now....i'm very untrusting of people....i have ...
Jun 14, 2009
