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Re: From a male's point of view.
Well, I know each guy is different and I'd like different answers to make up my character. 1. How would you react if your crush talks to you? 2.How would ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: All That It Took
haha i never had dreams... to lazy... to even try... but i do know what its like to be in the boys position... being battered by "friends" and peers... i ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: i can see it now..
thanks era and enlightened...your reviews are much welcomed =]
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: i can see it now..
thank you blu .....
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: i can see it now..
may i ask for some more reviews / comments ?
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: i can see it now..
haha thank you aqua and flower...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: i can see it now..
those still frames.. can't hide shit.. your not happy... i can see it.. the empty smile.. not matching your worried eyes.. i can see it... and its tearing me apart.. ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: The soul is eternal
ehhh.. dancing is ehhh physical excertion.. something people don't comply with this day and age... maybe on a videogame i'll dance... but in reallife ? i doubt it... unless i ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: life & Dreams
i found typos.. and things like that.. perhaps this person is your self ? not a person you'll actully meet... a being thats within you i suppose....that can keep you ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: life & Dreams
i found typos.. and things like that.. perhaps this person is your self ? not a person you'll actully meet... a being thats within you i suppose....that can keep you ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: I was so in Love
i suppose its to how some people manipulate others.. or that you just fell in love when they didn't... its a terrorible thing.. that it is... i'm sorry you cried... ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: the shadows are dancing..
hehe...thank you.... this poem would go good with my other poem the forest's bed.. thats in my yws blog.... they are kinda the same thing... except this focuses more on ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: the shadows are dancing..
haha thank you.. the dots are my habit of pausing while i talk... and i write how i talk.. mispronounced = you can see i use these dots a lot...its ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: the shadows are dancing..
The shadows.. dancing for your entertainment.. the rain tapping.. lulling you to sleep... and the forest is resting.. with you.. not a sound to be heard.. when your half awake.. ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: Tick Tock
i don't know what i liked and disliked about this...the tick tock repetition annoyed the hell out of me...sorry.. i guess... it seemed usless at parts... where it didn't connect ...
Jun 29, 2009
