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Oh, sorry! I was recreating a poetic scene, the part where Edward leaves Bella in Twilight. I know alot of people don't have very high opinions of twilight, so i ...

Everyone looks so nice... Please Advert youy eyes fom the small white boy in this photo.

Either yo have a lot of approximate rhyme or I am just not seeing it. Now then. Whose leaving? Why? When? And how/why do you know this person isn't coming ...

Grrr its small so there might not be a lot for me to say...Anyways. I love how you never say that the person is gone, nor that you miss them... ...

Thank you all, so much. It means a a lot to me. :)

very repetitive...gets a tad annoying in fact. and on line 16, it should be you're not you'r(first grammatical fix by me ever!!) now if you broke this up into stanzas, ...

its small... so I won't have much to say... a bit of questions and a bit of answering, no where do you "own" a piece of this poem Kate. I ...

nahhh keep it like that, it sounds better to wouldn't make much sense if they were born after all of this? and i do have a question about its beginning ...

lol nice..

wow that is soo cool !!! if you read left to right it makes sense and if you read it by column it makes sense !! that is so cool! ...

ahh rachel i found you! this is so small that there isn't really much to say. why did this warmth leave? i'd like to see that answered. whats so great ...

i didn;t exactly like the slight repetition of the frickle blossoms and the bubble laughter. i do not think that they were used too well...sorry. this seems to have almost ...

hmm it is small...won't be too much to say. but you should give more description of the man, more of how it affects you and him, and the good bye ...

Logan: Lovely tongue. xD Bob: Pretty Dandy. Ed: Zomg it's an Ed! (nice but why is the room pink xD) June bug: My goodness you're lovely thats my bathroom, it ...

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