silented1

Nurturing parents Days settle and rains come; washing and singing a mother-like tune. Saying softly underneath her breathe "Everything will be alright". Tapping and dancing the sun to life. Shining ...

You're making me want to post mine. Haha. And nice, I see you kept some lines, well most from the other poem you let me read. (Is this the same ...

Roses burned in reconciled soil, like stars, they grew with beauty and burned, so violently. Blue; crying, so quietly, mourning lost brothers, taking in their light, leaving only a silhouette. ...

I like the whole poem. =] It's nice, I really do like =]. Thanks for posting. They way the trees seem to sway to the same music I like this ...

Fanynesssss!!!! I love the pictures after the wolves. The girl one is cool. If you're up for it. I got a project I need a GOOD drawer/painter/ other type of ...

Hey, welcome to YWS. By the way I like your name. And first thing is use imagery. Most of what you have is okay. I don't have any real problems ...

Upon our first touch of lips, Thank you for not using kiss. IT's completely over used. Now with all my doubts dispersed, I carefully write you a free verse. How ...

Genius.

Light will be my stepping stone. From inflamed grounds to glorified mountains. Translucent stairways form and crumble with each passing step. As I aspire to "greatness" walking on would-be broken ...

Inspired by a trip to Asiatic Lion sanctuary in Gujarat,India,[/quote] To a place where everybody had a fear deep, Do you mean deep fear? We feared none as we were ...

I don't like the repition of please dear. It doesn't work too well for me. and your rhyme is okay, it didn't feel forced which is good. Something about this ...

Cough cough, wow. I practically have nothing to say. I liked it. You're wording was good and it had a nice effect. It really hit me. Great job(honestly). The only ...

I like it. I enjoyed the movement from alone to someone being with you. Also, thank you for not trying to rhyme. Friends and family, yes, they are here, but ...

OMG!!! My eyes!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Nice =]

I Open the door & i see everything. Those horrible nightmares & degrading futures. A thousand bullets & injured throbbing hearts. Scattered rose petals ,Dead memories everywhere. & Death knocking ...