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Dark red petals of a dark red rose, Dark red droplets on that dark red rose. The "dark red" is redundant here. =p It adds extra words, you know? Not ...

I am playing a game that you made for me. It is long and strenuous, but there is a prize I see. This stanaza has a lot of thoughts, not ...

Honestly, I was laughing. It was depressing, it was more so look at me, I can self destruct. This has a lot of ideas and thoughts over "poetic" words or ...

Okay, okay, I recently have become obsessed with reading poetry... but some pieces don't actually rhyme at all... Are they supposed to not rhyme?? Have you been sleeping? My poem ...

The sun rises and it's 7am. Eggs are strewn about the land, children searching for childhood memories, hopefully for looking back. When skies move, and time passes, years are eaten ...

I may compete, I am not sure if I will. =p I probably won't. Back in janurary and feburary I wrote 1 poem+ a day and I don't feel like ...

Can I go off topic and be rediculous with my posts? Excentric like? Tabloid like?

Hogwartz ...doesn't that sound like an STD for pigs? Holy crap, it does. :shock: I am sorry, your pig has hogwartz, it's going to fall off.

Err how does sulphur play into this? Exactly? OR is it a referance to flames AKA hell?

Welcome back.

But I am creepy and werid! *lurks around the dark cornners of YWS* Like a villian, like a villian.

For another, YWS is a global site appealing to people regardless of nationality, ethnicity, or religion. YWS News should be able to reflect that dynamic and present a wide array ...

Nice, you did take out most of it's repetitiveness, phrasing wise. But you still used the word, Don't, a lot, and that does make the read less enjoyable. You added ...

Without even reading your post, I can already tell that it's wayyy to repetitive. You may want to fix that. Also you have a typo in your second to last ...

Feel free to laugh. And I do feel bad defiling all the pretty pictures.