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Re: You
Only thing I have to say is don't be so repetitive. It's a bit boring but I really like your ideas and things. So yeah.
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: a tapestry of textures
The second one is a picture of Firestarter. =p Oh and very nice. Do you take requests?
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Am I wrong about this?
This all pretty choppy for me. If that the effect you were looking for, good job, if not you may want to fix it. Mostly I had trouble following from ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The Novice Master
Disclaimers suck. =p Welcome to poetry, if you plan to keep on writing. Also, welcome back. Okay, so to that first part. School, Second and Third languages, getting in my ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: a tapestry of textures
Is that black shape in the middle of all the colors a cat? Kittttyyy!!
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Wounded Angel
Fire scorched and fire singed Singed? Is that a word? Was watched but one That wished upon a star That's a bit awkward. You may want to say something like ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: The Puppet Children of Eve
This is good except it's abrupt. >.> If you made it flow more, it'd be easier to read. Other than that, good job. =p And some places seem to come ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Why?
The questions were practically over kill, Sorry. There are many other ways to express these emotions without the questioning. like, It's said that there seems to be a pot of ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: He Could Sing a Song
It's good except for the repition(He had this or he was this and all that jazz) and I have no idea whatssoever on what you're talking about here.
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: bu(r)ying place
There’s hardhat area nearby This seems werid to me, it just threw me off since there's no A between there's and hardhat. It just completely derailed me. and censored calloused ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Everything In The Dark
Here we are once more, Again. The again is redundent. Or whenever, That line seems usless, only there for rhyme. Not so good. Everything in the dark will shine. Really? ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Everything In The Dark
Here we are once more, Again. The again is redundent. Or whenever, That line seems usless, only there for rhyme. Not so good. Everything in the dark will shine. Really? ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Photo Exhibition [3]
I saw the links next to the picture titles, I was like WTF are those? Then I realised that they are songs. Lol.
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: See The Shape
You should do some reviews. Then I'll give you a review. =] Deal?
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: The Love of a Druggie
What is with you and posting incredibly long poems!? This really discourages my reading of it.
Apr 11, 2010