silented1

The cuts in my paper thin, paper skin why repeat it, when you say paper thin and paper skin, they mean the same thing... hold messages- holding? hollowly sliding towards ...

Forever alone, In a never again Once you promised me so much I gave you everything Gave you my thought, love, touch You don't need to say I gave you ...

Words can heal and words can kill Words are what make my blood spill, That's a bit redundant. Forever more to never pass, This sounds off, you may want to ...

Silence at night, might give you a fright. When every thing is quiet during the dark night This is veryyy forced rhyme, try not to do so. But when the ...

The wya you word this and at times it seems like you're trying to control the reader too much. Where it's like yet this or but that. You know? It's ...

You may want to try imagery and things, you know let the reader connect with what you're saying. It's a lot more fun to be talked with rather than talked ...

I wonder if the world will ever see me for me, or even for who I am becomming. I don't want them just to see my face, or even my ...

read and criticize That is the biggest deterrent for reviewing ever, for me at least.

Well, it seems pretty simple, the only thing I found complicated was the point system. But something that is currently complicated with the site is the sub forum things and ...

You have red hair in your beard Amidst the brown Looking so much like that Tudor douche Growing fat Or in your case More masculine I prefer you The i ...

Yeah, I see you. Sitting in the back of the room, hoping we’ll all just pass over the glaze in your eyes. Hiding under that over-sized sweat shirt of yours. ...

Errrr... Your structure is interesting and it reminds of me a spoken poet, doing hand signs and things of the sort while they recited their work. Very nice, I'd ask ...

Am I supposed to review this? Lol

Heh, nice poem, I am glad that it's not long and the only thing I've got to say is that the repition isn't that great, it kinda got annoying. Other ...

Found this one in my archives... You caught me! I’m thinking again. Go ahead, prosecute my emotions. This is pretty vague description, not much I can really get out of ...