silented1

LOLOL. Brillient!

He’s turned me into a typical girl. I used to like jazz, and I used to love poetry. Ironic? So you're doing what you hate, and that is ment to ...

You should do a couple reviews first. Then I'll take a look at your poem. And welcome to the site.

Yes. That is all I have to say.

I see a world of possibilities, I am sure you can make this less direct and boring. How do you see a world of possibilities, what am I supposed to ...

Would you kiss me if I said I loved you? Would you hug if I said I cared? Hug me, do you mean? and refer to below for further instruction. ...

I leapt through the Autumn leaves Bridging the chasm of empty air. Nice. I like this. Series of gold and red fall softly as I leap. Series? What is a ...

Welcome to the site, I forgot to check when you joined, so please don't let this scare you, if it does. I mean no harm, nor do I mean to ...

Hope everyone likes this :D not my best work br I like the idea of this. ENJOY! Your devil is my lover, A love that makes one wonder Why it ...

Listening to Guqin in Autumn The troughs lay barren Unused hay stacked high You should put some punctuation in there, it was kind of hard to see what it ment, ...

Poetry is like a computer, you need to make sure it's insides and hardware all work properly. Then you need to get a case, and decorate it, ofcourse. With rhyme, ...

Wisdom. The way your insight ignites, school's just a launching site. Straight path, I don't exactly like this, the straight path, then the curve to the right. I like the ...

Why do you stare at me with hatred and fear? You should use a simile / metaphor here instead of directly saying hatred and fear. I am the same person ...

There are little microorganisms that are living on you who have given you some form of invisibility. And it’s absorbing your words so that you can’t even say anything to ...

Try changing things up and using imagery and similes and metaphors.