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I turn my face from the sun I just can't face facing you anymore Ohh, I like that, face facing you. We've got no time, there's no time for us ...

Why won't the words come? I know how I feel, and yet they are still stuck inside my head. If they're stuck in your head, then you don't need to ...

You all know well the sun the great giver of day. Alright, this is out of flow, since the rest of the stanza or poem for that matter, doesn't really ...

Thanks again.

From the day that I met you Until the day that I die My love for you Goes deeper And never goes blind. How does this happen, why does this ...

Thanks everyone.

Shooting stars that wound and hurt That wound? That sounds a bit odd, and you don't need to mention wound and hurt in the same line, it's redundent. Raining clouds ...

My smile fades away as memories tug at the corner of my mind. Is this line needed? Or this stanza even? It goes to reenforce ideas below, and I say ...

My love listen to me I want you to be with me I love you more than my life Please would you be my wife Arg, this is so direct ...

A puppet pulled by her heart strings, Unless the strings do something out of the ordinary, you don't need to mention that the puppet is pulled by them, that's what ...

First off, thanks for inviting me. *refers to be has harsh as possible* A face... God made yours. Your mother carried you for nine months. She didn't get a glimpse ...

It’s like that moment when your entire body is cramped up, and you stretch, muscle by muscle by muscle, back arching like a languid cat. Much better, Much better, I ...

What can I do? Was I right? I made a choice- i thought it was right, This is redundent (drop it), we know you thought it was right because you ...

This is a quick poem that just waltzed into my head :) hope you like it Purple What is purple? I don't know, you tell me, if I wanted to ...

Do you remember Your first writing piece? You know, that one about the frog This is what is called over describing. We don't need the further connection. You ran to ...