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The smile falls from the stars Liquiod spilling from the rims of my teeth Sorry but there's no O in liquid. Why would you connect an idea that suggests beauty, ...

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The poetry database doesn't work. It gave me like a myslq error thing. This is all it is: [phpBB Debug] PHP Notice: in file /_config-rating.php on line 27: mysql_connect() [function.mysql-connect]: ...

The use of the "beat" can be cleverly played with. I like the stars example. This seems more like a practice poem, so I am not going to review it. ...

Hush my love. Why do you quiver? Why shake? Isn't quivering the same thing as shaking? So why ask the samething twice? It doesn't really advance your ideas at all, ...

I'd told you I care and I'd do what you want. I said I would live with you, Well, this is a bit shakey. Reason being is that, if you ...

TheNewHero for doing some nice reviews. And MeanMrMustard for that plagerism finding outing.

Follow you with my eyes shut, Your shadow can’t see your face. What does this have to do with anything? I’m jealous of your pure heart, Jealous of your kind ...

Everyone says she wants to be the center of attendtion. but that is not her intention. It comes naturally, and most of the time she doesnt want it. This is ...

When the moon is bigger than the sun, A noise will whisper in your ear, The thing about listing, like this line and the line below, it can show what ...

Any of mine please, need lots of feedback on them :) Alright, but please in the future, leave me a link. Amy, your review is done, I'll start working on ...

As with any poem I write, I have no idea if this is worth anything or not. If you think I should scrap it and start again, then I most ...

Like a review. Poetry only please. Post a link as well, along with any comments you feel you should add, like any special information that I'll need to know to ...

This is very list like. And the water fountain / water park part, it's random an should be taken out, they're not needed. Since they describe nothing and you don't ...

Ebony skin In ivory halls. What is the point for these first two lines? You give some sort of building and then you drop it. White dusty faces. What is ...