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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: 2/11/12

    This is a great work. A couple conventional errors. You spelled "becoming" wrong. But that's fine... One of my other problems with this is that, the rhythm seems a little ...

    Jul 19, 2012


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee