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Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline
Alright! Thank you all for your reviews. English is my second language so the grammar and stuff might be a bit off. And in Sweden we're pretty... Loose on the ...
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Re: oh, those teenage years
Really sweet story! I like it a lot. But then there is that thing that the other reviewers are saying. You should loose the Zoe: *Insert what Zoe says* And ...
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Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline 0.3
CHAPTER ONE: AND ALL THE NIGHTS WE SPEND TOGHETER It took forever getting down from the roof and onto the balcony. I had used the balcony to climb up from ...
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Re: Life is Like a Hill
This is a nice poem! I like the name of the poem and that you clearly explains why its called Life is Like a Hill although out the poem. You ...
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Re: Viva la Revolucion!
You are a great writer! This story really drags you in and i really like when people write about corruption in politics. Its exciting and it makes you want to ...
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Re: Sorry.
This is a very good and TRUE poem. I really liked it. You did a good job with it!
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Re: Chapter 1 (unknown title)
This is a nice story, it's really cute! But because it was Fantasy Novels section I would like it to be a bit more descriptive. Just because fantasy novels are ...
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Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline 0.2
PROLOG 0.2: TROUBLED SAGE My life was pretty simple before I met Sage. It was alcohol, parties, studies in the middle of the night and no sleep. I had no ...
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Re: A Nightmare or Reality?
Me myself is not that good at poems and I don't really read that much poems. But this one caught my eye and I really liked it! It is really ...
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Re: Silver Tears Chapter One
It's a nice story, it really is, and it has all the potential in the world. I just think that the flow could be a little bit better and the ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline
PROLOG 0.1: SWEET CAROLINE I met Caroline on the day I thought I was about to die. I had planned it for weeks; it was all supposed to go down ...
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Re: Charlie
I like this way of writing and I do think it brings the story onward. And the only thing I can think is negative is that you sometimes reuse a ...
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Re: Prologue
This was a very good prologue! You drag the reader in and make them interested. And by that I can tell you are a great writer. I'm very picky when ...
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