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Re: Solstice
I love all the detail you used it was so amazing and visual I could picture every detail. I wish I could write like you do. That was amazing!!! I ...
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Re: Blue Boy
Ok so question...would it make it more interesting if I started with a flash back? Ben's story before he meets christi? It's more exciting...he loses his mom when a gas ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Blue Boy
Yeah I seriously stink when it comes to punctuation/commas whatever. Thanks for your reply. I know it needs editing...I'm just not the greatest one for it if you know what ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Then Came the Ghosts
I liked the fact that this writing had a flow. The words lead into each other and the overall pieace was really great
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: What I Wish I'd Know Sooner
all of that stuff is true I have learned several of those things out the hard way.
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: The darkness of my closet
I love it u should finish it so i can read all of it :) and u better finish it buddy!!!
Apr 17, 2011
