shusher

I love experimental stuff, so, for me, this is top notch. However, the 3 word sentences that say what the previous 3 word sentence was a trudge through the rapids. ...

I appreciate the idea of waves kissing the sailors. I'll think it over. Grammar, as I mentioned in a different comment to my poem (hooray for supporters #thanks) is an ...

Punctuation... grammar in general, is an area I struggle in. By first 10, did you mean first 8, as in first 2 stanzas? Do you think that the voice change ...

Thank you so much for the feedback. I've started taking a look at the stanzas in terms of tense discrepancies. While there are some issues, the one you exploited, to ...