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I like this, it expresses a lot of emotion without making the story boring or unpleasent to read. I couldn't find any real gramatical errors. All I can say is ...

Wow, this was really good. Besides a few gramatical errors, it was perfect. “Why, on earth, would I do that?” I asked, watching my little sisters duke it out I ...

Wow Tony, that's deep. I never would have expected something like this from you, but you pulled through and made it good and enjoyable to read. But Kyte is right, ...