shiney1

Good poem. There seems to be many of these Gothic-like dark poems popping up more and more with things like Twilight becoming the "in" thing. I can feel the despair ...

Thank the Lord that I am not the only one who sees what is happening to our world. Very good, insightful poem! It flows well, and clearly conveys the main ...

Lovely poem. It emanates the feeling of peace and tranquility, and very nice description. Winter does seem to be a favorite season for meditation *laugh*. Very nice, no real revision ...

Oh my that's good! it looks so real, better than any building I could draw, I'll tell you that. I especially like the stone wall, and I would really love ...

Eyes telling no untruth, Seeking out no flaws, my impurities Only friendship, my trust More so than a human. No pig in a poke In those understanding eyes. Nothing to ...

This is a really good poem for a ten-year-old! I would like to see what you can do now. TheTruthLiesWithin pretty much summed up the grammatical things. And call me ...

Poems do not have to rhyme, and this is pretty nice. But I think that it does not really "feel" like a poem because of the flow. Poems need to ...

Wow. Very good imagery, very descriptive. I can picture the flower opening up at night and closing in the morning in slow-mow *laugh*. And the whole poem flows so well. ...

Oh my, now I feel so sad, because I am a horse lover. Is this a true story? No-wait, do not answer. Maybe because I like horses is why I ...

Here is a dragon I drew when I was in sixth grade. Please give feedback, even tips, if any!

Ooh, very nice! This brings me flashbacks of the movie, though I have only watched it in its entirety about twice. It looks good, and did you use colored pencils, ...

Overall, pretty good poem! It seems like one of those poems that leaves a lot of things to the reader's imagination, which is good, for a poem is not a ...

Oh yes, another one of those dark pieces that are getting more abundant as time goes on. The poem has good feeling in it, a tiny bit of suspense, but ...

Here is a horse I drew. I drew it this way just for the fun of it, even though I do not really like abstract or things of that sort. ...

Very nice! This poem has a lot of feeling, and you can feel yourself thinking about when anything like this has happened to you. It gives you what is needed ...