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It's a good first poem! Has good feeling in ti, and only a few corrections: Once upon a time , I could count on you . You could hold my ...

Rubric, very good point. Things like the media and peer pressure and such. Of course genetically enhanced foods are a fraction of it, but it does contribute.

AuroraOrodel, not everyone is like your 2 year old niece, by the way. Spank- –verb (used with object) 1. to strike (a person, usually a child) with the open hand, ...

Was there good rhythm? Did the rhythm enhance the feel of the poem? Oh my yes. This is one of the best if not the best poem I have read ...

I chuckled after reading this. You've got kind of the dame style of writing poetry as my sister. You are blunt, get right to the point, and have a good ...

Also, Durriedog, I don't quite understand what you are trying to say....

indigochild1991 what in world do mean by the human body was not made to eat meat? Then why do we have both canines like carnivores and molars like herbivores? How ...

I live in Texas, and I know. I also see the impact of one's culture or heritage on the spanking or no spanking issue. Americans don't really typically seem to ...

I don't think it's ever okay for a parent or any other adult to use violence against a child. It's cowardly to hurt someone who can't fight back, and shows ...

I think all this modifying is is helping the teen pregnancy rate. Why? you ask. They shoot up the milk and chicken with growth hormones, and we eat them, and ...

Being a strong believer in Christ, I do not like the death penalty. I do not believe it is our place to choose who gets to die and who does ...

Well, God is real, and all everyone is doing these days is proving that, from politicians to atheists. God said in the last days that people would say there is ...

pointe2drama brings up some very good points. And Christ is coming soon. Also, I think this G-Warming is rubbish. It happen centuries ago to the Ice Age , all it ...

I think that it is a bad thing to go through, but necessary. Since terrorists want to bomb our planes on Christmas day, we must do this. They brought this ...

This is a good first entry. It as good descriptive language, and you will see that you will get better as time goes on. Also, poems do not have to ...