shiney1

A kid who gets spanked isn't going to go "oh, well I guess application of force solves all problems!", they're going to go "OW! I don't want that to happen ...

I wouldn't say it's necessarily what just atheists and nontheists fear. It's what I, and probably my family and community, fear as well. And I wouldn't ever let videos like ...

Oh, my, this is wonderful! Very vivid imagery and great diction, and it actually sounds like somebody is talking to God. I’ll be your faithful slave forever, Until I fall ...

Kyllorac brings up a very good point. It shows that your opinion of how effective spanking is is partly shaped by the style in which you were spanked yourself. For ...

Has anyone else here been spanked at all? I would be a lot more open to the accounts of those you have actually experienced it first-hand, and it would help ...

Very good start! I like to real stories with this kind of style, and first person mostly. Just a few things: "Kate!" my best friend, Alexis called to me in ...

Oh, okay. Thanks for clearing that up!

This is really good! I can hear Meghan speaking, no monotone. I like stories and books like these because they give me a different point of view of another girl. ...

This is a good start. I love the imagery and diction. This poem depresses me, with its Gothic theme, which is getting quite common and tiresome, with Twilight and all. ...

This is a true story, and I wrote it for my English Final Exam Paper. My Guardian Angel The grass whizzed by unceasingly, playing over and over like a bad ...

Very good! So much descriptiveness and imagery, which keeps your audience focused. You just need a few things, pauses, capitalization, and periods mostly. You lied to my face ; Looked ...

I like this poem. It has a lot of emotion and is easy to understand, and is not to "boo-hoo I love you don't leave me!" mushy stuff that I ...

I love the colorfulness! I think it is cool that they eat Carp, and does it really taste that bad? What are with the fairies? And these pictures are not ...

I like the subject of light and dark without the Gothic-theme, which is used tiresomely these days, so thumbs up for that. As stated above, maybe a little, tiny bit ...

It's a pretty good poem. It's flow is good, but I got kind of confused because I could not really find a main thing to focus on. Head bent, winding ...