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  • Archive Re: Time Breakers *Permission Only* (Started~Full)

    Name: Autumn Shawman Age: 20 Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: She is not very talkative, but when she wants to speak her mind, there is no holding her back. She is ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stupid America

    Guys, remember that there is a debate forum. She seems to already have her mind made up and answered the dislikes. Plus many people do on fact like this poem, ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stupid America

    I, for one, love this poem. This is the first poem that talks about real issues with such bluntness and no sugar-coating that I have ever read, and it is ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: River-side Trees

    Wow, this is good. It has so much feeling in it, and the diction is great! I like the imagery too. Also, I like how the stanzas flow, and the ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Christmas Story

    I absolutely love this poem. It feels so nice to see a genuine Christmas spirit. It's good that some people have kept the "Christ" in Christmas. The poem has great ...

    Dec 25, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Thug

    Very colorful. I like doodles, especially in color. I also like how it is all playful in the background, and the thug is detailed. It brings out a good contrast. ...

    Dec 24, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ice Cream Romance

    Well, this is a nice refresher form the gloomy and Gothic-Twilight themed poems that are getting all too abundant in appearance. I like how it is short but sweet, has ...

    Dec 24, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Racism

    Sorry for going slightly off-topic, but I have an issue about this: Um, I'm Nigerian, and neither I nor any Nigerian I know gets offended when someone calls us black. ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Advertisements

    This is my first acrostic poem, I hope you like. A pparel, sweet dreams, false promises of fulfilled D esires, desires sought after in V ain, but that are still ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Judgement day

    Great poem. I like the subject, and the end of the world seems to be something that has become a popular topic of discussions. I think your poem is more ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Special

    This is a really good poem! It flows nicely, and the diction is great. I am a huge fan of vivid imagery, because I am a visual person, and this ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Kiss

    Okay. It's a pretty good poem. I got a little lost in the middle when the rhyming stopped, and the lack of pauses. I tell him I want to die ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Racism

    Simply because they recognize the difference in race makes you racist. Simple fact. Everyone makes judgments based on race too, not always big judgments like who to buy a car ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: the x-ray

    edit: please note, I have venom in my post, and if I'm too direct and blunt, I apologize. Apology accepted. I watch CNN mostly, because it doesn't always choose the ...

    Dec 21, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Caning Children

    Trust me, they don't look that deep into it.- cause--->effect I do something bad- Mama paddles my bottom hard and i don't like it. So i won't do something bad. ...

    Dec 21, 2010


Poetry is like a bird, it ignores all frontiers.
— Yevgeny Yevtushenko