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Re: Time Breakers *Permission Only* (Started~Full)
Name: Autumn Shawman Age: 20 Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: She is not very talkative, but when she wants to speak her mind, there is no holding her back. She is ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Stupid America
Guys, remember that there is a debate forum. She seems to already have her mind made up and answered the dislikes. Plus many people do on fact like this poem, ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Stupid America
I, for one, love this poem. This is the first poem that talks about real issues with such bluntness and no sugar-coating that I have ever read, and it is ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: River-side Trees
Wow, this is good. It has so much feeling in it, and the diction is great! I like the imagery too. Also, I like how the stanzas flow, and the ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Christmas Story
I absolutely love this poem. It feels so nice to see a genuine Christmas spirit. It's good that some people have kept the "Christ" in Christmas. The poem has great ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Thug
Very colorful. I like doodles, especially in color. I also like how it is all playful in the background, and the thug is detailed. It brings out a good contrast. ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Ice Cream Romance
Well, this is a nice refresher form the gloomy and Gothic-Twilight themed poems that are getting all too abundant in appearance. I like how it is short but sweet, has ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Racism
Sorry for going slightly off-topic, but I have an issue about this: Um, I'm Nigerian, and neither I nor any Nigerian I know gets offended when someone calls us black. ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Advertisements
This is my first acrostic poem, I hope you like. A pparel, sweet dreams, false promises of fulfilled D esires, desires sought after in V ain, but that are still ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Judgement day
Great poem. I like the subject, and the end of the world seems to be something that has become a popular topic of discussions. I think your poem is more ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Special
This is a really good poem! It flows nicely, and the diction is great. I am a huge fan of vivid imagery, because I am a visual person, and this ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Kiss
Okay. It's a pretty good poem. I got a little lost in the middle when the rhyming stopped, and the lack of pauses. I tell him I want to die ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Racism
Simply because they recognize the difference in race makes you racist. Simple fact. Everyone makes judgments based on race too, not always big judgments like who to buy a car ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: the x-ray
edit: please note, I have venom in my post, and if I'm too direct and blunt, I apologize. Apology accepted. I watch CNN mostly, because it doesn't always choose the ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Caning Children
Trust me, they don't look that deep into it.- cause--->effect I do something bad- Mama paddles my bottom hard and i don't like it. So i won't do something bad. ...
Dec 21, 2010
