shiney1

Very nice, and so true! :) Keep up the good work.

Another acrostic to add to my collection. S weet-natured little yellow sponge, your P ores and craters are splashes O n that square canvas, to accompany that N ecktie. Your ...

Okay. I myself found this poem interesting had it told a interesting story. I was not bothered at all by the "Little Girl" repetition, for, to me, it was just ...

Oh my, this poem almost made me cry. (that rhymes...) But really, this is such a nice poem, and I like how it is different and does not get stuck ...

I did this like 3-5 years ago, to let you know why it looks a little worn.

Okay. I like that you tried to do an acrostic, as many people have issues with those. I for one love to do them. I see that you were describing ...

I like this one. It is short and sweet and it flows (double points for that one ), which many people have trouble with when dealing with acrostics. I also ...

Ooh! This reminds me of Maximum Ride (great series, by the way) because of the title and the wings (duh). I like this! I like the ones in the middle ...

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Someone said that they could take someone out of their club if they had bad behavior, but I thought you had no control over who stops following your clubs once ...

Thanks for the review! I actually have never eaten there, I am a Subway gal, but I have looked around their reviews and their commercials and subs. Many not good, ...

Sorry if something is wrong, I submitted this on my iTouch. Q uite the fast-food chain, you are. U ndertaking the art of sub-making I n this competitive market. With ...

This is such an adorable poem! I like the repetition of "silly me" in each stanza. At first I thought it would rhyme, but it didn't, which threw me off ...

Autumn: Lab I watched as Lucas handed out the phones to the others, one by one, telling each of them about how careful they should be and yatta yatta. Gathering ...

Ha ha! I love the ending! It quickly turned the poem from interrogative to comical. This saying has been used a lot and can get boring, so i like that ...