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Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain
Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh??????????????????? It has great expression, but... If I sound harsh, please, I apologize in advance. I have no idea what this poem is supposed to mean or anything. It is ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: ♥♥Happy Poem in Your Pocket Day!!!♥♥
Today why don't you give someone a poem for their pocket? It could brighten up their day! ♥♥Happy Poem in Your Pocket Day!!!♥♥
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: The precise and mighty
Very nice poem! I just love the imagery, and great diction. You really captured the eagle's essence. There are only a few minor things: I gazed out of my window ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: The Monstrumologist, or The Terror Beneath
I read the sequel as well, but in y opinion the first is better.
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: D N Angel
My reviews will not tell you most of the story details or the ending, so if you want to read the book for yourself you can enjoy it. A shojo ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Truth.
You are very welcome! God bless.
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Truth.
Okay. I have never really read a poem like this before... I like the uniqueness of it all, but it is a bit confusing at times, and is a bit ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)
One word - Amen. I loved this poem and it has feeling. You really like creating works on controversial topics... My only real critiques are that, since you are speaking ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Hot Lunch
My reviews will not tell you most of the story details or the ending, so if you want to read the book for yourself you can enjoy it. I recently ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Ants
Okay, I like the feeling in this poem, because I can tell that ants make you upset. Maybe you could add more imagery than telling us actions. Ants They eat ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: sorry i don't want it up anymore
I really like this poem. The diction is not ordinary, and there is feeling to it as well, which is good to have in any poem. The imagery is not ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Charlie Sheen Lost His Marbles?
I have been watching him on the news and You Tube and I have to say, I think he has really lost his mind, what with all the jitters, smoking, ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
Wow. I really liked this, sounds interesting. It has a good gripper and if it were a complete novel I would want to read it. It's really good for your ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Sponge Bob
Thank you all so much for your reviews! thestorygirl, I can't add so much detail, for it is an acrostic, and there is a limit to what you can put ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Sponge Bob
Thank you all for the reviews! And thanks for saying it's well written, because I wrote this In 5 minutes :)
Feb 28, 2011