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Re: Horse Drawing #2
Hello there. I adore horses, my favorite animal, and draw them a lot :)I love the color choice, and the pose is basic and a favorite of mine. 1) The ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: All a dream
I loved the concept. I wonder what my dream would be like if I were swimming alongside my frogs (yes I have frogs) and they would speak without moving their ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Deleted for Family, again
I really like this poem. I love the shifting emotions, and the imagery is just wonderful! Great diction as well. Not much to correct here. Newly fallen snow, was a ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: A Birthday Poem For Friend's Birthday
This was touching. Your friend is blessed to have a friend like you, and happy birthday to them! This poem had a child-like happiness about it. You've been gone awhile ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Change username?
lol Thanks!
May 16, 2011 -
Re: I hate you.
This poem was cute,, but it may be hard for me to totally focus on this review since I was trying hard not to laugh at you avatar XD I ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Change username?
How can i change it, if it is even possible?
May 16, 2011 -
Re: I Feel
I like the texture and the emotion behind it. Angry, frustrated, tired, fed up? 1)One thing though, is that it is hard to pinpoint where the lighting is coming from ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: The Undead Cat
Okay. Poem does sound like you put it together in five minutes, maybe less. Halfway through I started questioning if this was a poem... The way it is formatted it ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: For the Boy Who Sits In Front of Me in Science
This poem, was pretty good, but I feel you could have done more.Not written more, but expanded and improve what you have. Some parts sounded like they wanted to rhyme, ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Three Lost Souls of a Tourist Town
I find this poem very interesting. I like the way it is written, actually, and the subject is intriguing to me as well. I like the imagery, but maybe you ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Hello!
Welcome to YWS Ayra! I'm shiney1, but people call me shiney or shiny. I like the new view on the Cinderella thing, that is some perseptive thinhkinh there, which means ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Grrr. Be afraid.
It is a shame, isn't it? All ages should be able to join!!!!! LOL Welcome to YWS. You will like it here, and by the way you speak, you'll make ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Make Me Whole
Really good. I love all of the emotion, especially the last stanza. He left me such a wrack ; Lost and alone , I had fallen off track . Attempting ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Spiral-Horned Dragon Head Portrait
Thanks you guys! to let y'all know I redid the eyes, but I have no drive to scan and reload it XD
May 14, 2011