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shiney1 here, and I will be your reviewer today! Well, I can sense the frustration in this poem, the tiredness at life. But this poem lacks many sensory details, imagery, ...

I love this poem. Not only does it have feeling, but truth and insight to the REAL God, the one that does not just love you, that loves you enough ...

You are on a roll today! Very nice poem! I love how the second stanza alludes to the second one. This window I'm staring through It is covered in thick ...

Wonderful! This poem flows so well, and you get an A+ for imagery! This verbal portrait You've painted with soft words. This line got me hooked I can see it ...

Thank you all for posting!!!

Wow, I love it! I think that the hand print is a nice touch. Maybe I would make the blood more realistic if possible? It is blood right? If not, ...

How come, when you are a group admin, it says you can "remove" someone else's post, but when you try, the page that comes up says "Hacker?" and you can't ...

Sorry about the boring title, but I couldn't think of anything else :) This one took me the longest to draw out of my recent portraits, as I have never ...

Yes, while writing this I had writer's block, and I am not sure if it is gone. It has been driving me mad, as I have never has it before. ...

Wow! This is very good for a first novel. I love the diction, and the imagery isn't shabby either. I am not one who reviews novels, for I am a ...

I have a question. You know when you said kissing is allowed and all of that. That doesn't go for the Hunters, right? Since they are sworn maidens and do ...

Re-take the crown, but instead of returning it he used his Grow-Ray to enlarge it. He then replaced it with the Sisyphus' huge rock, and now Sisyphus had to roll ...

Name: Jasinorhynna [pronounced : jazz-i-nor-ee-hah] (Jasmine) Age 17 Team: Artemis Appearance: Personality: She is very quiet, and loves solitude. She hates arguing with her fellow hunters, but when s

Wow. I love this poem! It is a concept that I agree with you wholeheartedly on. I commend you for voicing your opinion on such a matter. I'd hate to ...

Wow. For drawing with an iPad, that is very good! I draw dragons too, you can take a look at three of them if you want. The only things that ...