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shiney1

  • Other Poetry Re: Start, Stop, Erase

    Writer's Block!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD That's the first thing I thought of when I read this. I have never seen a poem like this before! A+ for originality. Some critics would say ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Brilliant

    Hey, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling the poem has, and the subject. It didn't have as much imagery as I would have liked, but it had a fair ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Booty Shorts

    XD XD XD XD I just love that picture, for one! I also love the topic and how you conveyed your message. I agree totally with what you said about ...

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: What Do You Admire?

    Hi, shiney1 here! The title sounded interesting, so I took a look. The first line was a bit intriguing as well, but as I read the next line, and the ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: DISCIPLE

    Hey, shiney1 here! You are the ONLY person I have seen on this site that does acrostics like me, in other words, does not murder the word and makes the ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hatsune Miku Pixel

    Thanks for all the compliments! I'll probably do Len next, as he is one of my favorites.

    Jun 7, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hatsune Miku Pixel

    Here is my first Vocaloid pixel, and Hatsune is lucky number one! It was interesting to change from doing pixel horses, and it was a bit easier. I used Photoshop ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Pixel Horse

    . Here is my first pixel horse. I saw others who did this on a horse website (they are my favorite animals in the universe) so I gave it a ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Club

    What happened to the clubs you admin if you delete your account?

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Len Kagamine

    Deleted for a better version. To see update, please click the link

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Keys

    Hey, shiney1 here! Okay. This poem was...different. I like the topic, but it is not that easy to understand. It is choppy in many places, hardly flows, and it leaves ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In ten years time

    Hey shiney1 here, and welcome to YWS! I like the concept, and it is understandable. It has some feeling in it, but the imagery could use some work. It does ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The F.U.N. Song.

    Genius!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If Only

    Hi, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling and imagery in this poem, though I agree with the first post, it is no masterpiece. It flows well in some places ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Pregnant at 16

    Hey, shiney1 here! This is a situation many teens face, so it's not a bad place to start. But since you are writing about such an overused topic, you should ...

    Jun 1, 2011


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain