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Re: Start, Stop, Erase
Writer's Block!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD That's the first thing I thought of when I read this. I have never seen a poem like this before! A+ for originality. Some critics would say ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Brilliant
Hey, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling the poem has, and the subject. It didn't have as much imagery as I would have liked, but it had a fair ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
XD XD XD XD I just love that picture, for one! I also love the topic and how you conveyed your message. I agree totally with what you said about ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: What Do You Admire?
Hi, shiney1 here! The title sounded interesting, so I took a look. The first line was a bit intriguing as well, but as I read the next line, and the ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: DISCIPLE
Hey, shiney1 here! You are the ONLY person I have seen on this site that does acrostics like me, in other words, does not murder the word and makes the ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Hatsune Miku Pixel
Thanks for all the compliments! I'll probably do Len next, as he is one of my favorites.
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Hatsune Miku Pixel
Here is my first Vocaloid pixel, and Hatsune is lucky number one! It was interesting to change from doing pixel horses, and it was a bit easier. I used Photoshop ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Pixel Horse
. Here is my first pixel horse. I saw others who did this on a horse website (they are my favorite animals in the universe) so I gave it a ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Club
What happened to the clubs you admin if you delete your account?
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Len Kagamine
Deleted for a better version. To see update, please click the link
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Keys
Hey, shiney1 here! Okay. This poem was...different. I like the topic, but it is not that easy to understand. It is choppy in many places, hardly flows, and it leaves ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: In ten years time
Hey shiney1 here, and welcome to YWS! I like the concept, and it is understandable. It has some feeling in it, but the imagery could use some work. It does ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
Genius!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: If Only
Hi, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling and imagery in this poem, though I agree with the first post, it is no masterpiece. It flows well in some places ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant at 16
Hey, shiney1 here! This is a situation many teens face, so it's not a bad place to start. But since you are writing about such an overused topic, you should ...
Jun 1, 2011
