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shiney1

  • Other Poetry Re: Start, Stop, Erase

    Writer's Block!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD That's the first thing I thought of when I read this. I have never seen a poem like this before! A+ for originality. Some critics would say ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Brilliant

    Hey, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling the poem has, and the subject. It didn't have as much imagery as I would have liked, but it had a fair ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Booty Shorts

    XD XD XD XD I just love that picture, for one! I also love the topic and how you conveyed your message. I agree totally with what you said about ...

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: What Do You Admire?

    Hi, shiney1 here! The title sounded interesting, so I took a look. The first line was a bit intriguing as well, but as I read the next line, and the ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: DISCIPLE

    Hey, shiney1 here! You are the ONLY person I have seen on this site that does acrostics like me, in other words, does not murder the word and makes the ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hatsune Miku Pixel

    Thanks for all the compliments! I'll probably do Len next, as he is one of my favorites.

    Jun 7, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hatsune Miku Pixel

    Here is my first Vocaloid pixel, and Hatsune is lucky number one! It was interesting to change from doing pixel horses, and it was a bit easier. I used Photoshop ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Pixel Horse

    . Here is my first pixel horse. I saw others who did this on a horse website (they are my favorite animals in the universe) so I gave it a ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Club

    What happened to the clubs you admin if you delete your account?

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Len Kagamine

    Deleted for a better version. To see update, please click the link

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Keys

    Hey, shiney1 here! Okay. This poem was...different. I like the topic, but it is not that easy to understand. It is choppy in many places, hardly flows, and it leaves ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In ten years time

    Hey shiney1 here, and welcome to YWS! I like the concept, and it is understandable. It has some feeling in it, but the imagery could use some work. It does ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The F.U.N. Song.

    Genius!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If Only

    Hi, shiney1 here :) I like the feeling and imagery in this poem, though I agree with the first post, it is no masterpiece. It flows well in some places ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Pregnant at 16

    Hey, shiney1 here! This is a situation many teens face, so it's not a bad place to start. But since you are writing about such an overused topic, you should ...

    Jun 1, 2011


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)