shiney1

I'm not really sure what to say about this, except that it's very unique, a bit confusing at times, but interesting to read :D So I like it...yeah XD

Banned for not getting back to me on that avatar request XD

Ooohh...This was interesting indeed! And it is actually short, which is part of the reason I like it. The ending was especially wonderful! And the imagery was very nice as ...

This was pretty interesting. Thank God it wasn't about dating and teenage love, because that gets annoying. I felt as though some of the sentences were too long, and you ...

What the post above me said. But dud you really want a review in this? Or was this for fun?

This poem may sound pretty babyish, but I wanted to write something short ans simple, and this is what came to me. Oh tree, little tree, my heart does envy ...

Welcome to YWS! shiney1 here :) This is a pretty good poem. I like that it's not a depressing love poem that I see here so often DX Also, I ...

This poem is very good! I feel the hurt (but not how she feels, of course). The imagery is pretty good too. Nitpicks I'm not what you see, I'm not ...

Welcome to YWS! shiney1 here, and I'll review this for you. This is a very nice poem, and a good first impression of what you can do. I feel as ...

I like this. It is a simple poem, easy to understand, yet holds a lot of meaning. I feel that people who can write deep poetry without using all of ...

This is nice :) It's refreshing from the usual things people write on YWS, even in the religious category. Very original. I like the bit of history you put in ...

This is so sweet! It's original, and it flows well. The main thing that bothers me though is that it's a bit too informative to be a poem. Yes, poems ...

This is just wonderful. The imagery was very good, and the poem flowed pretty well in most places. Also, it had a lot of feeling, and I was hooked from ...

Wow. This is good. I'll admit, it didn't grad me at first (Maybe use a better opener?) But as I kept reading I enjoyed it. Imagery 7/10 (it's hard to ...

Despite the views of others, I liked this poem. It flowed well, and though it was rather repetitive, that was this poem's style, and I can understand that. I wish ...