shiney1

Hey Sol! That is a very good question, by the way... :/ I like this poem, that it's short and sweet. It flows pretty well for the most part, and ...

Then start over *shrugs* Let's step it up a notch. Crack

Granted, but you get stuck on train tracks and have to abandon it, so it get's totally mauled by the train. I wish the next person would grant this wish ...

Banned because you said "cuz" instead of "because." :p

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***Anyone is free to comment, of course, but I need someone with a good artistic bone in their body to give me a proper review on this. And please ignore ...

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I knew my sentence was not wrong!

Hey, shiney1 here! This poem is short and sweet, and I like that. But many things can be done to improve it. I feel like it was rushed when written, ...

This is pretty neat. I love contrast pictures :) But as stated before me, maybe a smaller picture would help ;) Also, the background looks too blurry to me. Since ...

I would like to review anyone's work that wants me to for 20 points each, if they fit these guidelines: I Review: - Poetry - Short Stories ( They MUST ...

Granted, but it gets infested with termites. I wish I had a bamboo tablet.

Xiaolong, Qiu

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