shiney1

This is pretty good. I love how you talk about yourself, and the acrostic format. The thing is I wish you expanded on it more. It is a bit too ...

Bravo Sol! I couldn't have said it better! I find it amazing how you can convey controversial things so smoothly in poetry... One things is that recieve should be "receive." ...

This is my first poem after a 2-month-long Writer's Block episode D: It might be a bit etchy, but I got down what I wanted to. One of my acrostics ...

I am black :p Are you?

If you like, please "like." This is something we are doing in AP English. This is my submitted rough draft,. I am qualifying that not all women need a man, ...

I have watched you and you seem to lack a whole lot of punctuation in your works :( so it sounds like rambling. More elaborate revied later.

Oh, hi? So subject, you made an account for her or something? Well, anyways, welcome to YWS!

Hey, shiney1 here :) I absolutely love the imagery here! Good use of similes as well. Although, I feel that this poem lacks a great amount of flow, so it ...

I agree with the post above. I like the voice it has, pretty unique. I think it is just fine for a little girl telling the story. Very nice :)

@ TheLockedLibrary Thanks for the comment on my drawing! And as far as dragons go, they are fantasy creatures, so there are millions of designs. Dragons can look like lions, ...

***Anyone is free to comment, of course, but I need someone with a good artistic bone in their body to give me a proper review on this. And please ignore ...

AD;LAJD;LAJF;LJA;LDJFJJL; I LOVE YOU (This is not a review, because that is not a piece. :P)

I'm back, at your request :D I love that you put more into this! It has reached more of it's potential this way. And I saw some corrections you made, ...

This is wonderful! Short and sweet, easy to understand but deep. Someone who can put those elements successfully together has talent ( and God's help ). Very nice!

. *I have more pixel art in the Pixel Art folder in my Portfolio if you are interested.* I wonder why I never really got into doing cute pixel food. ...