shiney1

I put it in the Other Category since all written profile and drawing is up to look at. If you would like to comment on the dragon or profile, I ...

I agree with the above post, that this is too short. I love the first 4 stanzas, which create a happy tune and entice the reader to read more. The ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) Let me just say that I really like this poem. I was intrigued from the beginning, and I never lost interest on the way down. The ...

Hey MeanMrMustard. I have to say that I liked this poem. It had great imagery, explosive yet calm emotion, and was not cliche in format. A bit part of why ...

I agree with the above post that it is a bit too fast-paced and short. There are not even enough context clues to tell that the narrator is a boy, ...

Once again, stunning :D

Simply wonderful Qara! I love the imagery. It felt a bit choppy in some areas, but overall, not bad at all.

Hey Boo :) Nice poem you've got here. It made me smile, and I wanted to reassure the narrator that, "Yes, He does hear you, honey." I did have a ...

Just a little cheesecake icon that I did out of boredom. I can't tell if my pixel shading is improving... **It is that small because the avatars on Deviant Art ...

I really like this. This is what I miss, and I totally agree with you. Nowadays some people take it too far, and put barriers as to how elaborate poetry ...

Once again, Firefox Spellcheck has failed me. Jubilus is a word. Slicing through the clouds around, Lustrous to view, its glare profound; Jubilus song and choir await, Right behind the ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) Well, for starters, I like the royal and regal voice in this poem. It does indeed sound like the voice a majestic dragon. Plus, you did ...

Hey Boo :) Let me just say that the imagery you have is very good. You show much improvement that you are more clear on what is going on in ...

Hey Boo! Well, I love the idea and the theme of this poem, and I am glad to see you trying different approaches. I find the "short and sweet" aspect ...

Hey Boo (can I call you Boo?), here as you requested! First of all let me say that I see much improvement in this acrostic versus your previous ones. You ...