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Humana humana hmm... I like this idea... I'm just not sure what I'm doing. I understand that I have to create a character but how do I fuse mine with ...

Wow. You crack me up too. I'm sorry I misspelled your name. Sometimes I get carried away... I feel awful that I did that. I'm so so so so so ...

WHOOOOOO!!! YOU'VE HIT THE MARK VALENTIME!!! All right enough celebrating down to buisness. You were right lots of grammer errors. My suggestion for that is just read it out loud ...

So I have a few problems with this chapter. First I have lots of questions. Normally that's not a bad thing, you want the reader to ask questions to keep ...

Hey I posted the prologue a while back and got lots of mixed reveiws becuase it was confusing I've done some editing and I've written the frist (or so) chapter. ...

So... Well... I've got a bone to pick with you. I don't know where you live but I can tell you it's not Colorado. I can tell that because I've ...

:thud: Oh. My. God. I. Love. It!!!! Wow! I read the frist chapter and I was confused as to where you were taking it. This is just the thing that ...

Ok. so I've got a lot of little nitpicks. Well a couple big ones at least. I really felt like you rushed through this story. I think you were just ...

Thanks for comenting. I just have on thing to say. I guess I wasn't very clear when I said that Rachel was dead. I supose I should've said that she ...

This is for all the people who have witnessed the violence of gangs and have been harmed by them. This is especially for Bishop who last his cousin to a ...

Hey! WOW! I thought I was crazy. Goodness, my perception of the world was wacked. Anywho that's not the point. What I really wanted to say was when she's describing ...

THis has been really helpful. Thanks so much!

Thanks for you guys' reveiws! I'll try and fix everything I can! Also I'd like to point out that Chad is the narrater here. I know I didn't make that ...

“Best friends never break up, Chad. I promise.” That’s what she had said. It seemed like such a distant memory but it stung with the same pain as always. She ...