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Wish I could fly away To somewhere where guilt rewards And pleasure causes no pain Wish I could stop this icy flow Of hateful words and blood That make me ...

Thanks everybody! I will try my best to finish this. But sometimes I get really blocked so sometime in the future! Tahnks again!

Hey. I haven't done this in a while. Just thought I'd put this up here. It isn't done but I don't really know if it makes any sense. So, I'd ...

So I have two poems here that deal with the same topic. The first is the attempted break up. The second is the second-guessing that comes after. You con critique ...

For the first time in this style I think you did a splendid job, honestly. I liked the flow of it. One place you could improve is your transitions. In ...

Just something I wrote as I remembered some really bad stuff that happened to me and how I got better afterwards. Please comment, I could use the constructive criticism. Sometimes ...

As man as I can manage!!

Hmmm... Interesting. Before I dive head first into this critique, I would like to point out that you did have a few errors in grammar and spelling here and there. ...

Wow... I think I might have to check out that band you were talking about. What were they called again? They sound like mega inspiration. So just out of curiosity ...

EEWWWWW!!! *shudder* That was awful! I know that was the purpose of the exercise but still. I liked this a lot because of the way things were generalized and perfect ...

I’m a liar. If every time a lie fell out of my mouth I had a piece of candy my teeth would have rotted out a long ago. Of course ...

I'm ver confused right now. I'm not sure quite what you were trying to do, or what the poem was even about but I liked it. No, I loved it. ...

All righty. Before I delve into this let's all take a deep breath. All right now that that's out of the way let''s get started. I. I really liked this. ...

Wow. I like it. Keep posting. I want to read some more of your work. Also, I kno lots of people have said they dont like the chopiness but I ...

I wasn't sure where this went so I decided to play it safe and stick it here. Please reaview. Tell me if it makes any sense. Thanks. I always think ...