shikha1

Nice poem. However, I think you could put in a little bit more details. The poem looks a bit vague. And as you said, bit more imagery. Besides that, good ...

Darkness closed in all around With loneliness so profound, All the lights and colors disappear As the eyes turn into a sea of tears. I hold back tears with all ...

Amazing start. Though, I think you could add a bit more detail to Heather's character. Like how she looked, what Thom liked the most about her and so on. You've ...

After staying at Delhi for 10 years, I was pretty sure that I wont have to change my school, leave my dear friends or adjust to a new life again. ...

Hey! This is an amazing story. You got me hooked up to the story right from the beginning. The way you have described the scenes is good too. Though, you ...