shesarebel

Alright, so I wrote some more and this is what I got. There might still be a lot of grammar mistakes because I'm not so good at catching those, but ...

Very cool. You can actually feel frustration of writers block. "Words, words that are not good enough, words that are not worthy, words that are a mockery to the art." ...

mizz-iceberg, kailamarie, Thanks for your reviews. I hadn't realized that I had so many typos! I'm definitely writing more, though!

This is the first piece of fiction I've written in a long time. I don't know how good it is. I would like to know what you all think of ...

It was good, but it was so awful! I liked it, but I extremely disappointed. I thought it had potential to be an amazing epic, but as soon as they ...

I mostly write poetry, and I really want to write longer fiction, but I can't get my stories long enough and also, everything I write I fear is terribly unoriginal ...

Wow. If there were more I'd definitley read on! The tense does shift, and personally, for a prologue that appears should happen in the past it should be past tense.

Nice story. It's a little confusing and there are some typos, but all that's fixable. Towards the top, you say "The assassin docked the arrow...", and the proper word is ...

Wow. That was really good. Very detailed. A lot of stories written in a sparse, sort of modern, I guess, style tend to come of as generic, but not this!

Wow. You really get chilled when you read this. The last stanza doesn't really end. It would be better if it had a definite finish, I think. But, good job!

So, what kind of fiction and poetry do you like to write most? Do you like chocolate or vanilla better? Land or sea? Strawberries or Bananas? Pen or Pencil? As ...

Hi, I'm new here, quiet obviously. I read about this site in a writing magazine that I was reading in Borders that I didn't buy. I like writing fiction a ...