sherineahmed

Hi, First, i would like to say that was really good for a first try. You tried to improve your story writing skills in fantasy : Thanks for your honesty ...

thnx for the helpful remarks but this was written by my sister ( insists on getting into other people private business).

i wrote this for every body that was forced to be taken from his world and imprisoned in another, for every body that knows the feeling of trying so hard ...

She was broken. It had happened gradually, i feel you better start with: She said she was broken, and so broken she became. and cancel the other part it will ...

open your mind, explore see for the first time that you were blind don't let any thing stop you let your mind fly have dreams, have hope even when you ...

great work, i felt you explained how the character feel in an excellent way.