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Re: I want to motivate women to feel worthy of full respect.
A woman’s question: “Do you take me seriously?” should be asked in a given situation, for example, with a male. Whether as friends or lovers, a man should always take ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: It is a Time
It is a time For change and a time For growth Chain smoking and no boundaries “is that really me?” She asks herself No. It is a part of her ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: Your Brain
at first I though you may have unintentionally spelled the words wrong and used improper grammar etc. but soaking it in with a different mindframe, thinking you did that on ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: Smoking Camels on Your Grave
honestly, I am covered in goosebumps. I read this aloud to my friend and we both really took it in and wow, amazing. You really showed so much depth within ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: A slice of the old me
it's hard to complain when i know only an ounce, an eighth, less than one out of an ion of what is going on outside outside my house, my town, ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: I hate you with all my hearts
Hey this is really good. I can almost hear it in my mind as I read. What type of instrumentals do you see in accordance here? Are you interested in ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Are They Listening?
Good use of rhyme here. I really like when such emotion is combined with rhyming rather than just free verse. Unbelievable that you can feel and expose so much at ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: "My Mother Says I'm Guilty"
That was really deep, easy to relate to. Only 16? Wow. Keep up the richness in your writing, you have a gift. I really like repitition in any literature.
Aug 6, 2008
