sheepkitty

Hello there! Thanks for the panda ;D I will read back through my now more spaced apart paragraphs, and see what useless description I can cut out. Maybe then it ...

Hey! Wow, this prologue drew me straight away. I don't know whether you are using the consistent repetition of 'I lay my babies...' for effect, but if not, try writing ...

Hey! This is a short chapter isn't it? I'd suggest if you haven't posted a prologue already, that this became your prologue. Or alternatively, that you extend on the first ...

The sky was emblazoned with orange, not only from the dying sun. Sat on the top of the sand dunes about a mile from the centre of Tripoli was the ...

Thank you very much! I think the most research for any element of this book will be for Phuna's section of the story, looking into the behaviour of gangs and ...

Hey! I was leaving it here as a plot summary so I could get a verdict on whether my plot was good or not before I got in depth with ...

A woman called Katti, 22 years of age, born in 2017. Romanian, a student in law. Has a younger sister, and many half siblings she has never met. Father died ...