shayna

I reluctantly walked into Geometry (my last class of the day) as the day was drawing to a close. I stopped mid step to see Cody Ford sitting in the ...

I was happy to be home. It felt great to be in my own house, my own room, and my own bed. I decided to sleep for a few hours ...

Okay you guys gave me great ideas, and the truth is, nobody has ever even read this piece before aside from you all, so thanks you've given me a lot ...

Okay, I know it's not anywhere near close to being completely edited, but I decided to quickly fix some of the obvious mistakes, and I added another section to it. ...

I really like it so far! You've got me wanting to read, so good work! Just one thing: I think you should put some more things in between reading the ...

It's a little bit predictable, so I think you should shake things up a bit. Maybe throw in a few tragedies or something. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading ...

How do I view what writing I've posted and how do I know if someone has commented on it?

Once again, a great read. I suppose I should be critiquing you on what you're doing wrong, but I think if you took my advice, you'd end up screwing up ...

I'm not too good at finding mistakes and whatnot, or maybe I'm just to lazy. I'm just here to enjoy the story, because I really am enjoying it. Things are ...

Your story is starting to get even more confusing but I'm not going to say anything until I know for sure your not going to clarify. After I read the ...

I cannot believe your only thirteen. I'm hoping in the next chapters it will be less confusing though. I don't understand what this has to do with chocolate really yet.

Wow, I'm really excited to read the following chapters. It sounds like it should be a very interesting story. Have you written anything else besides this story? I would be ...