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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Betrayed A Dream

    Hey there Musky. Nice poem. You will get very far. A few tips: Focus on how you form some sentences. Stanza 1, line 5. Instead of "So, I left it ...

    Aug 24, 2016


It's been many years since I had such an exemplary vegetable.
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