shaunisntwrite

But little did my parents know just how my unfortunate I could be. I know that there are some grammatical problems with this sentence. I like the story, the descriptions ...

Okay. First, I noticed a few spelling errors. I wonder if you could have double checked your grammar before posting this (Although I know you well, and I understand that ...

I think this is an amazing short story and I think that you could take the story line and publish it into a legit novel. I know I would be ...

*died (Jk). I think that this was a good story, although the ending was rather sudden. I like how this was written from the point of view of a story ...