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Re: The Larks of Narcissus
Thanks for the wonderful comments! I do agree that some lines were a bit long, but I couldn't quite figure out how to fix them while keeping their original meaning... ...
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Re: Broken Table
Kingdoms far and legions wide Shrivel like raisins with fear. You, the broken table, scarred and heart sunken, See that their legs too are broken. I like the imagery in ...
Jan 4, 2011
