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Re: Words Associated
Leaf
Jun 25, 2018 -
Re: Critique game - first three sentences of your novel/story
The beginning is kind of dry. There really isn't a claim as to what will be happening later on in the story and the ending of this with 'now I ...
Jun 25, 2018 -
Re: Nowhere
Kaelynn nodded and hopped off the mound of rubble. The doors could wait for another time because who knows what was behind them. She looked at the wall again, where ...
Jun 24, 2018 -
Re: Nowhere
Kaelynn sniffled and cast her gaze downwards. "They didn't harm me. Almost ate me alive, though." She added a pitiful laugh afterward and looked up. "Thanks for bringing your gun ...
Jun 24, 2018 -
Re: Nowhere
Kaelynn felt a tingling sensation in her leg as she finally got the black blob off her foot. Bo was now up here, firing at the blobs with his gun. ...
Jun 24, 2018 -
Re: Nowhere
Kaelynn was now on the landing when she realized the three doors reminded of her a creepier version of a game show. There were three shut doors with polished knobs. ...
Jun 24, 2018 -
Re: Nowhere
Kaelynn was laying against the wall when she heard someone yell out her name. After a few moments, she realized it was Issac. She scrambled up and yelled, "Issac! Where ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: Nowhere
Kaelynn heard the smashing sound as she was figuring out what to do with the surprise cash bundle. Glancing over, there was a long stretch of the wall but she ...
Jun 22, 2018 -
Re: What Happened to Benjamin Marcos?
Chapter Updates: Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Return to Shortcut
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: The Character Clinic
Hey Stella! So, I have some questions regarding being stabbed. My character in my current novel is stabbed after poisoned by cyanide. Originally, I was going to have the character ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: What Happened to Benjamin Marcos?
I was just looking for that place, haha. And yeah, I'll post there, thank you again for your help!
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: What Happened to Benjamin Marcos?
Oh, that makes sense. Sorry that I was confusing in any way! I think I may go with the cyanide poisoning and then Fredrick possibly posing the body in some ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: What Happened to Benjamin Marcos?
@Rosendorn - thanks for your answers! A date-rape drug could work in replace of using arsenic or cyanide because if I were going down the path of having Fredrick use ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: Introduction
Welcome to YWS! :D
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: What Happened to Benjamin Marcos?
So, I need some help deciding on a poison to kill Benjamin off. I did a bit of research but I'm stuck between these two poisons. The two I have ...
Jun 20, 2018
