shanan

um.. thanks for your advice. You are right, I should cut off all the snakes that I don't need. Pm me, o.k? read my other story( death), and tell me ...

I was finally free. I felt like body was exposed to the world like never before. My heart was racing and I new that I was soon to be reunited ...

give me some of d'at! 10/10 man! keep it rollin'!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow!!! That was amazing! :D 8) :wink: Have you ever thought of continuying that story of yours? Write more! Write more! Please!!! You are awsome! Maybe yoy can give a ...

D'ont be so harsh!!! bye

Hey, Your story was really interesting but, have you tried to write anything else? Not that it matters or anything but I was just wondering cause I think that with ...

here is an example of dialogue from my book, it is in my opinion the best example of dialogue i have ever written. regardless of the fact none of you ...

Ice. Cold agaisnt my hard feet but yet not bothersome. The harsh wind was at my back and racing past my ears, blocking all sound around me. I knew I ...