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Very nice. I thoroughly enjoyed this little bit you did. See? Size doesn't matter. I'm not sure what I cannot criticise here, but this is a very good start if ...

Hmmm, interesting. This is just the first chapter so I don't want to be too picky before I see where you're going with this. It breaks my heart to see ...

Pretty much everything was already said. To feel you the truth I really expected this to be cheesy, come on its Disney. I was pleasantly surprised by this fanfiction, it ...

8/10 Very true but I partially agree. Darkness can be appreciated as well. It doesn't always have to be a negative thing.

Hello, Obviously I'm new here and so I'm introducing myself. I've always like daydreaming as a kid (only child and all) and so when I finally learned how to write ...

This is a pretty good poem. It seems like you know what you are talking about (if you don't then shhhh). However there were a few things I think I ...

Check once, check twice, check three times Dinner on table, children quiet I fix my outfit and my hair Everything is perfect He walks in Beautiful, rare smile upon his ...