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Note: So I'm not sure what category this quite falls under...flash fiction, maybe? A series of vignettes? Anyway, if you have feedback on that I'd like to hear it. Also, ...

These are beautiful! I have to agree that the best one is the one with the boat. It's a pretty scene, and the angle of the shot is really interesting. ...

Hey Caitlin! This is a great start. :) Got a few suggestions for you, and a few notes on grammar and word choice. Here we go: Layla had always been ...

Hey KitxKat! Nice work. :) Here are my comments for you: ~Overall, I like the story. You pull the reader in right away, and the plot you've set up has ...

Excellent, I really enjoyed it. There were a few things I noticed however... He could ask an eagle for directions, or converse with a dog of cat. did you mean ...

Excellent, I really enjoyed it. There were a few things I noticed however... He could ask an eagle for directions, or converse with a dog of cat. did you mean ...

, "is the reason they this place Mourner's Peak. you missed a word there. Otherwise, very nice. I definitely want to read more. :)

Theo Heart - Thanks for all the help. Although I have been writing for years now I sometimes forget to consider those basic questions (especially during the summer when my ...

Right, yes, that would make sense. Does it work that the major connection between the characters is the ability to hear the voices? Or should I have the protagonist be ...

Thank you! That was really helpful feedback - I'll definitely be making a few changes. I see what you mean about the ending, too. I forgot to consider that, standing ...

Prologue: Emmy Foster, one of the first Listeners Far, far away, they are singing. They are singing to the earth, to the moon, to the sun and to the sky. ...

I'm quite new at this and haven't posted my own stuff I have a few questions. What if you aren't sure where a story is leading and therefore do not ...

I didn't realize there was a chapter after the prologue already - so then of course I was very happy to be able to read more right away! :) I ...

I like this quite a bit - it draws the reader in right away, and I liked the pacing you used (not too fast, not to slow). I did notice ...

Hey, I'm Katie...just joined today. This site seems really cool. I'm hoping it will be inspiration for me to finish more stories (I tend to start them and then break ...