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Crank + Glass by Ellen Hopkins: This novel is so chillingly disturbing, but it's so true at the same time. She allows you to ease into the characters' lives without ...

Okay, thanks for the pointers, guys. I fixed the last paragraph, and I fully plan on using this as I go through all of my other chapters as well. This ...

Charama June 19th, 1032 My name is Charama Halome. I live in a time one thousand years after the life of Christ, and I am 18 years of age, outliving ...

Hi, there! Okay, so first of all, you have a decent opening. My suggestions for you as you go on, or if you want to edit it further are: 1. ...

This poem was beautifully written. The imagery that you used places you in the scene and you can see it all unfolding. I found nothing wrong with the length, however ...

Prologue: The Beginning May 21st 2010 My name? That is not important. All that you need to know, is that I am not one of your kind. I can see ...