shadowsoldier

Porn is porn, just like Harry Potter is Harry Potter. After one showing of Harry Potter are you going to become so attached to it, it will ruin your life? ...

With the falling of the snow comes silent blanket of white powder that brings a certain joy. Snow flakes land in my hand only to melt away. The free falling ...

While the freedom to speak your mind is beautiful thing, it is like anything in the world it is the person who uses it to make it negitive and derogative. ...

My question is who would you be controlling? Robots, or apes with chips in their brains? To control the battlefield you do need soldiers.

I not sure if the last post was a joke or not but you really need to work on your grammar and spelling. *Shakes head*

So I was wondering what you guys think of the election and the battle between Obama and Clinton. (Don't know why but it makes me laugh.) So who do you ...

You want to watch your punctuation in the poem, you went from a comma to a new sentence with nothing in between. Other thatn your punctuation I thought this poem ...

The storyline is good, but you need to work on your transistions. “Never,” Toar, the ship’s keimon told her. This confused me, who is talking and to whom.

The storyline is good but you need to work on your transitions between one moment and the next. “Never,” Toar, the ship’s keimon told her. This confused me, who is ...

I believe that we all are just energy and when we die that energy shifts to a plane of other energies.

Ok this is my first post on here so don't go to hard on me. It was another long night as he lay back on the gurney, having already dealt ...

I didn't like how this poem started with a rhyme and then went on as if it was never there. In poems it will do you well to be consistent ...

I really liked this poem, it brings about a couple of interesting emotions that you wouldn't expect. I liked how you ended this piece, like what some said above me, ...